你肯问肯学已经是很好的了。加油吧！
I am poor in english. 还可以。
the words “Rotaional Gl”is one of my net-friends's nickname.
在这里，the 应该改为 The。words 改为 word
The word 'Rotaional Gl' is one of my net-friend's nickname.
and i know that there must be many mistake in my words.
改为，I know that there must be many mistakes in my sentences.
so please point out !you are so kind to help me!i will pay my appreciate !
改为，
So, please point it out.
You are kind to help me out.
Sincerely appreciated/ I appreciate your kindness.
你还不错嘛。句子（首先）越简单越好。刚开始学的时候，用简单的词语是比较好一些。错字就会少了。句子短一些简单一些，就可以了。