My English World
As we know, it is very important for us to learn English today. People should speak English in many special situations and important meetings. More and more people pay attention to it and try to learn it. It is widely spoken around the world. It’s becoming the most common language and the most important language. Learn English well, and you’ll find it easier to talk, to study, to think and to succeed.
When I was only a little kid, I began to learn English. I knew the 26 letters and some simple words. Sometimes, I tried to learn some children’s songs in English and sang them with my friends. That was a lot of fun. When I played computer games, listened to English songs, watched the NBA games and watched movies, I could always learn new words in my normal life. So I really enjoyed the process of learning new words at that time. I began my colorful life in the English world.
Years later, we start to have English lessons in our school. With the help of our teacher, I have made rapid progress in studying English. I realize that it’s not only important but also useful to us. I try to think in a different way when I understand the words; I try to feel the feelings inside by myself when I read the articles; I try to be more confident when I speak English. I have fun doing everything about English.
I hope I can travel around the world, to learn more knowledge, to make friends with foreign people, and to speak English with my foreign friends. I can also teach them Chinese and introduce our beautiful country to them, so that more and more people will get to know Chinese rich culture.
There is a saying, “Rome was not built in a day.” I believe if I study hard at English, I can speak and use English very well.
I’m confident that as I love English everyday, it will love me, too. And my dream will come true.
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參考答案:My English World
As we know, it is very important for us to learn English today.
开头就用代词不好，主题放前面突出
As we know, learning English is being very important for us in these days
People should speak English in many special situations and important meetings.
和第一句有冲突，不应该用should 应该使用，听起来有些象提倡使用英语而不是强调英语变的更加有用。
People speak English in many formal situations and important meetings.
人们在很多正式的场合和重要的会议中使用英语。
More and more people pay attention to it and try to learn it.
你强调的是学英语，不是人们，如果要强调很多人学。换成a lot of people 或直接数量词。Thousands of people, millions of people
It is widely spoken around the world. It’s becoming the most common language and the most important language.
English is …………important language all around the world
板子挥的响落的轻，强调一下。
Learn English well, and you’ll find it easier to talk, to study, to think and to succeed.
When I was only a little kid, I began to learn English.
I have begun to learn English since I was only a little boy/girl
点出性别, 难道现在不学了？换现在完成时，在演讲中尽量不要把从句放前面。
I knew the 26 letters and some simple words. Sometimes, I tried to learn some children’s songs in English and sang them with my friends. That was a lot of fun. When I played computer games, listened to English songs, watched the NBA games and watched movies, I could always learn new words in my normal life. So I really enjoyed the process of learning new words at that time. I began my colorful life in the English world.
Years later, we start to have English lessons in our school. With the help of our teacher, I have made rapid progress in studying English. I realize that it’s not only important but also useful to us. I try to think in a different way when I understand the words; I try to feel the feelings inside by myself when I read the articles; I try to be more confident when I speak English. I have fun doing everything about English.
I hope I can travel around the world, to learn more knowledge, to make friends with foreign people, and to speak English with my new friends.
上边这一大段加上 FANBOYS for and nor but or yet 尽量转化成几个句子，没有人愿意听一大堆I做主语的句子。
I can also teach them Chinese and introduce our beautiful country to them, so that more and more people will get to know about Chinese ancient history and rich culture.
There is a saying, “Rome was not built in a day.”
however,I believe if I study hard at English,
I can use English very well in my daily speech.
Use 包括了说。这样更符合逻辑。
I’m confident that as I love English everyday, it will love me, too.
And my dream will come true.
