As is vividly betrayed in the chart above,the number of private cars has been climbing over the years and rocketed to over 13 million in our country in the year of 2004 .Most of people are of the opinion that this is a symbol of our improved living standard.But do they realize that increasing cars have led to serious environmental pollution? Scientists have warned that unless effective measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand.Therefore we should attach significance to solving it.
There are, I think, at least two feasible ways to copy with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to authorities to take measures to control the quantity of private cars. With the help of governments, however great the will to achieve, and however great the demand to succeed, we should never abandon our moral and social consciousness. The other way that is worth adopting is to work out new regulations. We must engage in through discussions in order to gain a better sense of the most appropriate and effective way to proceed with enhancing the public's awareness of invironmental destruction . Only in this way can we succeed in solving the problem in the near future.
To conclude, we should not yield to mediocrity regardless of seemingly insurmountable obstacles. The trend towards raising the general public's consciousness of protecting environment will inevitably make the world a better place. So the prospect we are looking forward to will be bright and encouraging.
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參考答案:As is vividly betrayed in the chart above,the number of private cars has been climbing over the years and rocketed to over 13 million in our country in the year (of去掉) 2004 . Most （of去掉） people (are of去掉)have the opinion that this is a symbol of our improved living standard. But (改为However) do they realize that increasing cars have led to serious environmental pollution? Scientists have warned that unless effective measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand.Therefore we should attach significance to solving (改为solve) it.
There are, I think, at least two feasible ways to copy (改为deal) with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to authorities to take measures to control the quantity of private cars. With the help of governments, however great the will to achieve, and however great the demand to succeed, we should never abandon our moral and social consciousness. The other way that is worth adopting is to work out new regulations. We must engage in through (改为thorough) discussions in order to gain a better sense of the most appropriate and effective way to proceed with enhancing the public's awareness of invironmental destruction . Only in this way can we succeed in solving the problem in the near future.
To conclude, we should not yield to mediocrity regardless of seemingly insurmountable obstacles. The trend towards raising the general public's consciousness of protecting environment will inevitably make the world a better place. So the prospect we are looking forward to will be bright and encouraging.
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