big big world很好听,可是它歌词里面有一句i'm a big big girl男生没法唱。哪个高手把它改一下。还要押韵
參考答案:我也很喜欢这首歌,可是歌词整体来看是十分细腻和情绪化的,而且也是从女生的观点出发,所以如果只是更改那句"I'm a big big girl" 会显得突兀,因为后面的歌词会搭不上。
相信您知道这首歌是在诉说一个女生对于已结束了的爱情的惆怅与不舍,因此它的表达方式不宜用在男生身上。
我尝试更改了某些部分的歌词,希望对您有所帮助。
原词:
Big Big World
I'm a big big girl
In a big big world
It's not a big big thing if you leave me
But I do do feel that
I too too will miss you much
Miss you much...
I can see the first leaf falling
It's all yellow and nice
It's so very cold outside
Like the way I'm feeling inside
I'm a big big girl
In a big big world
It's not a big big thing if you leave me
But I do do feel that
I too too will miss you much
Miss you much...
Outside it's now raining
And tears are falling from my eyes
Why did it have to happen
Why did it all have to end
I'm a big big girl
In a big big world
It's not a big big thing if you leave me
But I do do feel that
I too too will miss you much
Miss you much...
I have your arms around me
Ooh like fire
But when I open my eyes
You're gone...
I'm a big big girl
In a big big world
It's not a big big thing if you leave me
But I do do feel that
I too too will miss you much
Miss you much...
I'm a big big girl
In a big big world
It's not a big big thing if you leave me
But I do feel, I will, miss you much
Miss you much...
更改词:
Big Big World
There's a big big love
In this big big world
It's not a big big thing if you break it
But I do do feel that
I truly will miss you much
Miss you much...
So I see the first leaf falling
It's all yellow and nice
It's so very cold outside
Like the way I'm feeling inside
There's a big big love
In this big big world
It's not a big big thing if you break it
But I do do feel that
I truly will miss you much
Miss you much...
Outside it's now raining
And tears are falling deep inside
Why did it have to happen
Why did it all have to end
There's a big big love
In this big big world
It's not a big big thing if you break it
But I do do feel that
I truly will miss you much
Miss you much...
I have my arms around you
Just last Autumn
But when I open my eyes
You're gone...
There's a big big love
In this big big world
It's not a big big thing if you break it
But I do do feel that
I truly will miss you much
Miss you much...
There's a big big love
In this big big world
It's not a big big thing if you break it
But I do feel, I will, miss you much
Miss you much...
大部分的词是原封不动的,我只是将副歌和一些单字更换了。比如原词那句:"And tears are falling from my eyes (泪水也从眼中流下)" 我改成了:"And tears are falling deep inside (泪水也在心中落下)"。因为男生泪如雨下的情景是让人难以接受的,而且在心中哭泣会显得较委婉,也较凄美。
最关键的副歌部分,我把:
I'm a big big girl
In a big big world
It's not a big big thing if you leave me
But I do do feel that
I too too will miss you much
Miss you much...
改成了:
There's a big big love
In this big big world
It's not a big big thing if you break it
But I do do feel that
I truly will miss you much
Miss you much...
原词大致上是在述说一个女生生活在这浩瀚的世界上,被爱人离弃了是多么微不足道的事情;但尽管如此,她仍会想念着爱人。而改版的词是在诉说爱情生存在这浩瀚的世界里,就算被爱人捏碎了也是多么微不足道的事情;但尽管如此,他仍会想念着离去的女生(因为现在是从男生的角度出发)。
若有什么疑问或不解可以向我提问。由衷希望你会喜欢为您改的词!^^