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問題描述:

1.What do you think of TV commercials? Do they tell the truth?

In this modern society, TV is an important and usual consumer media. Some manufacturers put their advertisement ad by TV .These commercials can make people know more and more products. We found more and more new products in today's advanced technological world. The commercials market is booming. This is a way to improve the marketing rate of new products. There are many bad businessmen. They sell fake or inferior products in order to earn more money. They use different ways to make up those products, and make those products look like high quality products. So some people can't make them out.

2.Do you think it is easier to be a father or a mother? Why?

I think it is easier to be a mother.Because in our society mother is only thought to have to take care of a child's health, living problem and so on. It is only some physics aspects. But I think to take care of a child's mind is much harder. Because you have to keep showing him the right way, you have to build a good example for him to follow, and have to have great patience to correct every mistake he will make. And you have to think what he is thinking, as we will know child's thought is almost impossible to think. You have to be like a child to be his friend, to affect him.So I think its easier to be a mother.

3.What makes a person beautiful?

People often think that makeup can make individuals beautiful; it's the simplest and fastest way to make one more fashionable just to change her makeup, hairstyle and habiliment. However, I think smile can make one pretty, let people would like to close to her/him. Amativeness can also make one more beautiful. When people fall in love, they always feel happy, joyful, and their skin will become more red and more moisture, and make their whole shining. But there is also another beauty that can't be replaced, that's kindness in thinking, heart, soul.... this is the most enchantment beauty, beautify our soul makes us charming absolutely, believe it or not.

4.Tell me about your Chinese name. Do you like it? What does it mean?

My name is Ni Xiaofei. Ni is my family name that was a small country formerly. It is said that Ni family has been disappeared 600 years ago during the war time. The survivals were traced by some person who wanted to kill them. I had had to live a hard life concealing my identity before the end of the war. So today, the family name is rare. Xiao is my middle name and it means early morning. Fei is my first name that means the aroma of flower. I really like my Chinese name. Another reason is, the name gave by my grandma and I will treasure it. Because it is full of my family’s expectations.

參考答案:

1.What do you think of TV commercials? Do they tell the truth?

In this modern society, TV is an important and usual consuming media. Some manufacturers put their advertisements on TV .These commercials ad can make people know more about their products. We find more and more new products in today's advanced technological world. The commercial market is booming. This is a way to improve the marketing rate of new products. There are many dishonest businessmen. They sell fake or inferior products in order to earn more money. They use different ways to make those products, and make them look like high quality ones. So some people can't distinguish them .

2.Do you think it is easier to be a father or a mother? Why?

I think it is easier to be a mother.Because in our society mother is only thought to have to take care of a child's health, living problems and so on. It is only some physics aspects. But I think to take care of a child's mind is much harder. Because you have to keep leading him to the right way, you have to build a good example for him to follow, and have to have great patience to correct every mistake he may make. And you have to consider what he is thinking, as we know a child's ideas are almost impossible to get. You have to be like a child to be his friend, to affect him.So I think its easier to be a mother.

3.What makes a person beautiful?

People often think that makeup can make individuals beautiful; it's the simplest and fastest way to make one more fashionable just to change her makeup, hairstyle and habiliment. However, I think smile can make one pretty,that people would like to be close to her/him. Amativeness can also make one more beautiful. When people fall in love, they always feel happy, joyful, and their skins will become more smooth, and make their faces shining. But there is also another beauty that can't be replaced, that's kindness in the heart, soul.... this is the most enchantment beauty, beautify our souls makes us charming absolutely, believe it or not.

4.Tell me about your Chinese name. Do you like it? What does it mean?

My name is Ni Xiaofei. Ni is my family name ,which was a small country formerly. It is said that Ni family has been disappeared 600 years ago during the war time. The survivals were traced by some persons who wanted to kill them. They had to live a hard life concealing their identity before the end of the war. So today, the family name is rare. Xiao is my middle name and it means early morning. Fei is my first name that means the aroma of flower. I really like my Chinese name. Another reason is, the name was given by my grandma and I will cherish it. Because it contains full of my family’s expectations

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