当兵给我一个人生新的起点,并不是所有人都能这样的机遇,到一个没有人认识自己的地方,重新开始做我喜欢的自己,如果我想成为一个什么样的人,我就会努力向着这个目标方向去努力奋斗.当我再回到学校的时候,我再一次把握机遇,成为了现在这样一个努力的,有目标的人.
參考答案:Being a soldier gave my life a new starting point .Not every one had this opportunity to go to a new place and meet a few strangers.make a new start to be myself.If I want to be a kind of man,I will do my best to be him!When I came back to school,I grasped the chance again and became the one who now has goals and aims!
你怎么那么不要脸啊..!
我一个字没改
你倒是把我软件翻译的证据拿出来..
这么点分..至于这么faceless么>??
不是我专家自居,我还从没用软件翻过呢..!
你看你都写些什么?
Becomes a soldier to give me a life new beginning
首先,时态有问题..再次,主谓语无伦次
all people all can such opportunity
这是什么话? 谓语呢?
to nobody knew own place
说真的.,,没人可以写的出来..
中间懒得 看..
has become present such diligently, has the goal person
这句diligently形容词好险没用错,has the goal 又是什么?
形容词么??
呵呵
真是好笑.
我叫多些人来看你写的,...!