During my past two years,taking the position of declarant in the first year , the position of declarant and vice manager of bussiness department the second.Familiar with the procedure of customs clearance of most of the goods,individually capable of the operation of the clearance of the import and export goods .Very careful and patient, proficient in English.Able to work independently!
我想在简历中用这段话，麻烦各位高手帮忙看一下啊，谢谢
參考答案:感觉读起来很不对……
这样不伤筋动骨的改改算是将就了
In my past two years,I worked as a declarant in the first year , and took the position of declarant and Vice Manager of Bussiness Department in the following year. I'm familiar with the procedures of customs clearance,and I'm individually capable in clearancing import and export goods .I'm very careful and patient, and I'm also proficient in English. I firmly believe that I am able to work independently!
你这个 proficient in English 太夸张了点，我英语专业毕业都不敢这么讲-_-!
PS:楼上兄弟的修改很简洁明了。你可以就说Competent in English.