先生，女士，大家好，我的名字叫XX,我毕业于XXXX大学计算机系在2001年，我已经工作了2年了在XXXX电脑公司工作了两年，参与了2个项目,都是教育软件，用在学校里，帮助网络教学。我负责网页编码。2004年我来到这里。在中国大学是4年制的，在第四年我和我的朋友创建了一家公司，给企业和个人作网站，结果很遗憾，因为运营不善，关门了。
我非常喜欢羽毛球，经常会召集朋友去打羽毛球，我还很喜欢旅游。
对于团队工作，我觉得应该大家和睦相处，分清任务，互相帮助，遇到问题不能推卸责任。
參考答案:petitmiracle你好，我建议你理清一下表达的顺序，因为先顺着你的大学教育背景，说完大四开创公司的经历，再谈你毕业后的工作状况，那样会比较好。
先生，女士，大家好，我的名字叫XX,我毕业于XXXX大学计算机系在2001年。在中国大学是4年制的，在第四年我和我的朋友创建了一家公司，给企业和个人作网站，结果很遗憾，因为运营不善，关门了。
Sir and Madam,
Nice to meet you. I am XX, a graduate of 2001 from the University of XXXX. In my fourth years in the school, my friends and I founded a company, to design web pages for corporations and individuals.Unfortunately, it was closed due to poor management.
我已经工作了2年了在XXXX电脑公司工作了两年，参与了2个项目,都是教育软件，用在学校里，帮助网络教学。我负责网页编码。
I have worked for two years in XXX computer company. During this time I took part in two projects, both of which were computer-aid network teaching softwares. I was responsible for web page coding.
我非常喜欢羽毛球，经常会召集朋友去打羽毛球，我还很喜欢旅游。(有稍作改动）
I like playing badminton, and often I will share this game with my friends. We enjoy quite a fun in it. And I am also fond of swimming. It keeps me healthy and energic.
对于团队工作，我觉得应该大家和睦相处，分清任务，互相帮助，遇到问题不能推卸责任。(有稍作改动）
Since 2004 I have been in XXX(你的城市拼音),I enjoy my life here and my career with my colleague.From my former job I learnt that only when every member sees to their given task and help each other out, the whole team then work efficiently.
参考资料：Good luck.