求助``修改英语文章

王朝知道·作者佚名  2012-07-02
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分類: 教育/科學 >> 學習幫助
 
問題描述:

As a student, I of course cannot be concentrated on studying one hundreds percent, I need combine exertion with rest. Studying is not everything; oppositely, if I get some rest suitably I would do much well or get a higher mark. Cell phone is also a camera, a MP3 player, a messenger and a game player. I could download and save many songs, take and save some pictures or talk over the phone with friends who on the Internet when I get leisure. It provides me many interesting things to do so that I can relax entirely, and help me to achieve the goal easily.

谢谢各位啊``

參考答案:

one hundreds →one hundred

need combine →need to combine

much well →more well

to achieve →achieving

who on the Internet →who are on the Internet

我能找到的就是这些错

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