帮我检查一下文法有错吗?

王朝知道·作者佚名  2012-09-25
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問題描述:

If I am a small cloud, at dusk, I want to let the sunshine shine me, become the cold lion for a moment, become the blue chrysanthemum that a basin is being opened again for a moment. Anyway, in any case, I am willing to let people appreciate the colorful morning glow.

If I am a small cloud, I will float to the hot Nefud. In the sky of the Nefud, I will see and stand the little trees in the desert under the shining suddenly and violently of burning sun, drooping the head listlessly, so very thirsty as to die soon. I will shed tears sadly; it is which leaves the small sapling on the body that the sparkling and crystal-clear tear is dripped. They have smiled, stretch out green hands to accept the sweet rainwater naughtily, I am amused so much as to smile through tears too.

參考答案:

一开始该用虚拟语气,因为你根本就不是云

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