even though i have learned english for 3 years .. but i find i can speak fluently .specially in some chat room , such as icq chat room . when i get a stranger words .. i have to look them up in dictionary .
but i find it is really effectlly to chat there .. i learn a lot of useful phrase .
sometimes i wonder when i can speak english fluently as a native speaker .
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參考答案:第一个learned换成studied会更好些
根据意思but i find i can speak fluently应该是否定的意思所以在can加not
when i get a stranger words 这里的get换成encounter,words 去掉s
i learn a lot of useful phrase 这句应该用过去了learn 变为leart, a lot of 后面应该跟phrase的复数
我目前觉得可以商榷的地方就这几句,说出来供参考,向你学习,我都没写日记的习惯了