1\ You need to chage a train in Beijing.
2\ Would you like anther some coffee.
3\ Jim Green is stronger of the 2 yound men.
4\ This kind of cake looks good and smells well, too.
5\ How long has the factory opened?
6\ I'll get someone mend the bike for you.
7\ It's very good for you to help me with it.
8\ Work hard, you can catch up with them.
參考答案:1\ You need to chage a train in Beijing.
change拼写错误,in改为to.译为:你需要换一辆去北京的火车.
2\ Would you like anther some coffee.
another some改为some more ; coffee是不可数名词,不能用"另一个"来说.
3\ Jim Green is stronger of the 2 yound men.
young拼写错误;of改为than," ...of the two"的句型前面要跟比较级,而不是最高级.
4\ This kind of cake looks good and smells well, too.
well改为nice或delicious;well是修饰行为动词的,而look,smell,watch,taste等词都像be{am,is,are}那样作系表动词用,后接形容词adj.不接副词adv.(你们如果发英语辅导报,上面应该都有介绍吧.)
5\ How long has the factory opened?
opened改为been open;因为用现在完成时是表示一段时间有持续性的事情,open是瞬间性的行为动词,不能用于表示可持续性的状态,所以要用系表结构,将open变为形容词,表示一种状态.
6\ I'll get someone mend the bike for you.
mend改为mended,"get sb. 加动词的过去分词"译为让某人做某事.
7\ It's very good for you to help me with it.
for改为of,It's very good of you 是固定的习惯用语.
8\ Work hard, you can catch up with them.
在work hard前面加If you.动词本身不能直接作句子主语,或者加ing,或者加to,或者在前面加成分.
