改下语法错误和句子连贯性的错误(附上全文,改的地方最好用别的颜色)
谢谢了
參考答案:Certainly, it’s freedom. [Get] what I always want. The class is [more than] that in the senior middle school, I don't need to study until the middle night, and there never be so much chatter [that] told me to do this and that. I [have] so [much time], but I don't get the excit. [Why?] I ask to myself. The last dream [that] studying in a college has already [came] true. However, what’s the next dream? I don't know, I don't know what should I do in so much free time. I feel [bored], I feared, so bored [so] I could do nothing [without] [wishing] the time could be passed much faster.
But suddenly I get it! I know the [meaning] of my college life. It means searching, working and achieving! Searching for my dream, working for my dream and achieve it! Maybe it's [so] different from my thoughts. But it's the real [meaning] for me.
Don't let the future just a dream, use our power and intelligence to get the future. The life will be exciting.
对不起阿,.
本来是用颜色区分开的
但网页上打不出来
我用[]标出来了
有的地方是语法不对
有的是不通顺
还有一个我觉得用meaning比thoughts要好
不过不敢肯定
有个词弄不清意思就没改<第5排的第3个词>
多多见谅
不对的指出来
我才初三,.! 互相学习嘛
