今天是儿童节,我六点半就上学了。在上学的路上,我非常高兴。到了学校,学校很美,天空碧蓝,鸟儿唱歌。同学们穿上新衣服,载歌载舞,多么的快乐!
參考答案:Today is the Children's Day ,I went to school at 6:30.On the way to school,I'm very happy.Then I arrive at school.School is very beauitiful,the sky is deeply blue,and the birds are singing.Schoolmates are wearing new dresses.We sing and dance,how happy we are!
楼上的,你要注意节日的大小写,动词时态的变化,词性,词语之间的搭配。还有,put on 是表示“穿”的动作,wear是表示“穿”的状态。