(1)The man gathered the pieces next morning and ready for repaired the bed,he put it on the roof and tired it down.he found that he has been liking this bed.
(2)i invited a friend of mine to dinner,i chose the most expensive restaurant.we had a good meal,when the waiter asked for the bill,i was embracessed for i have not got enough money,so i have to borrowed some money from my friend ,but he said *OH.i have no one cent*
參考答案:(1)The man gathered the pieces next morning and ready for repaired the bed,he put it on the roof and tired it down.he found that he has been liking this bed.
next morning 建议改为 on the next morning
ready for 改为 was ready for 或者got ready for
repaired改为repairing
put it 改为put them
tired it down 这个我没看懂,不知你要表达什么意思。
has been改为had been
整段话意思看的不是很明白,把你想说的中文也贴上,这样更好帮你改。
(2)i invited a friend of mine to dinner,i chose the most expensive restaurant.we had a good meal,when the waiter asked for the bill,i was embracessed for i have not got enough money,so i have to borrowed some money from my friend ,but he said *OH.i have no one cent*
meal后的逗号改为句号。
embracessed改为 embarrassed
have not got改为had not got
enough money 后面再加个on me 可能更好些。
have to borrowed 改为had to borrow
i have no one cent 改为 i haven't a cent on me
或者 i have no cent on me.
整篇时态不一致比较突出,后篇意思表达要比前篇好些。
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