请帮忙修改一下下面的作文,谢谢:
In the past, my house was ugly and small. We didn’t have many appliances. We just can watched few program from our small TV, the TV was only in black and white color, we were not happy about it. And we couldn’t tell time from our broken clock. There wasn’t a fan in my house, so we felt hot in summer. The curtains were too short to keep us warm in winter.
We didn’t have enough money, so we just had vegetable for dinner, it made me feel hungry all the time. And we wore old clothes and have to wash in hands. After school, I did many housework, so I didn’t have time to play. I was unhappy at that time.
Because of my parents’ hard working, we are rich now. My house become more beautiful and bigger. There is a big yard in front of my house, many trees and flowers are planted there. We have many modern appliances，such as air conditioner, computer, washing machine, fridge, and so on. It make our life become interesting and easy. We watch different programs in our big colorful TV. And we can know the time from our watches or mobile phones. We use the air conditioner to make us warm in winter and cool in summer.
We have all kinds of meat and fish for dinner everyday, the food is tasty and fresh. And I have a lot of snacks to share with my friends. My parents often buy me many beautiful cloths. We also have a factotum to do the housework, so we have enough time to do the things we like. I am very happy.
If we work hard, our life and the world will be more wonderful. I love my home, I love this world!
參考答案:帮你列出要改的句子：
（附上了较详细的分析^-^）
第一段中：
We just can watched few program from our small TV, the TV was only in black and white color, we were not happy about it. 建议改为：
We could only watch few programs on our small tv.(这句是语法性的错误) It can just show videos with black and white colors.(安原句会误以为电视自身的颜色是黑白的)We were not satisfied about it.
将tell time改为be told time或know the exact time,否则便是“报时”的意思了。
so we felt hot in summer改成in summers，下面的in winter同样改为in winters
第二段中：
We didn’t have enough money, so we just had vegetable for dinner建议改为We had to eat vegetables for dinner because we were poor(或者用we were not rich enough)
下面的and have to wash in hands不太理解什么意思，但如果一定要用的话要改为and had to ...
再往下的many housework改为a lot of housework(housework不可数)
第三段中：
my parents' hard working改为my parents' hard work,并将后面的my house become改为my house becomes
下面的such as后面的电器请都加上the,并将后面的it make改成they make
在We watch different programs in our big colorful TV这句中，彩电的英文应该是color tv,而colorful tv则是只自身颜色是彩色的电视。
在We use the air conditioner to make us warm in winter and cool in summer这句中，同样，将in winter和in summer改成in winters和in summers
第四段中：
第一句中，将everyday改为every day,连起来的是形容词，分开的才是副词
下面的beautiful cloths改为beautiful clothes,另外后一句中的factotum感觉不太习惯，建议改为servant
其他的就看个人写作习惯了，语法上没什么问题了。
就这些，有问题找我哦^-^
