When World War 2 broke out,Disney joined in
the Red Cross and went to France,there
he stayed until the war over. After the war,he
returned Kansas to work for a company
where made fairy story cartoons.This was
the kind of work he like best.He determined to
find better ways of making the cartoons moving
so that the cartoon characters will seem alive.
Later he joined his elder brother,Roy,in Hollywood,
California.There they soon put up their own company.
參考答案:1.去掉"in"
2."there"改为"where"
3.在"the war"和"over"之间加上"was"
4."return"后面加上"to"
5."where"改为"which"
6.你可能打错了 "like"可能是"liked" ."determined"前面加上"was"
be determined to do sth.
7."moving"改为"move"
8."will"改为"would"
9."join"后面加上"with"
10.Maybe 将"put up"改为"build up"
