我十分荣幸再次收到Green River的通知书 我在那里将学习4年半的商务/贸易专业 因为这所学校强化基础教学 所以我十分向往到那儿进行学习和深造
我在这所学校的学费将由我父母来支付 这是他们的工作及资金证明 请您过目
毕业以后我会回到中国 相信以我在美国学习的经历 能在中国的不久后取得成功
---对不起 我没太听明白您的问题/意思 我知道我的英语水平很一般 但我今后会在学习专业的基础上更加勤奋的学习语言
參考答案:I will be honored extremely receive Green River the written notice I to study 4 year half commercial/trade specialty once more in there because this school strengthening foundation teaching therefore I yearned for extremely will carry on to there studies and pursues advanced studies I to pay this in this school school expense by my parents will be their work and the fund proved asks you will glance at after the graduation me to be able to return to China to believe but the experience which will study in US can obtain the success by me after China - - - to be unfair to me soon not to have too understands what is heard your question/meaning I to know my English proficiency I from now on to be able very generally in the study specialized foundation the more diligent study language