把这个翻译成中文，再看看有米有什么语法错误！谢谢了！
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Five years ago, Jane was in love with her boyfriend Richard, who was a handsome and tall man. Maybe “tall” is a weak word. “Towering” is better to describe the 29-years-old guy.
For both Jane and Richard, it’s not their 1st love. Either of them had their own heartbroken story. But when they got to know each other, they determined not to hate anyone, even the one who had hurt them. Jane, at that time, was 19 with blonde hair and fair skin. She was often absorbed in her own emotion, the love of nature and animals. She was fond of birds in the Black Forest in south Germany. She never knew for a man her kindness itself had been attractive. Oh, I forget to tell you, she was remarkably beautiful.
One day, Jane went to join a birthday party of her friend. The guests amounted 20 and everybody was vigorous and pleasant. Jane danced with a very tall man with black hair and a look of gravity. This was Richard, who fell in love with his partner at first sight. After the party, they left together. When Jane realized Richard was generous and also had a love for animals, they stroke a romance.
Richard was so reliable and loyal for Jane, which made Jane immensely happy. Jane was also a devoted lover, who often gazed upon Richard in private. 2 weeks later after the party, they had it. Jane didn’t hesitate to accept him because she fully agreed that love involves to satisfy your lover unconditionally. She was cute and Richard was jubilant, even frenzy. They played animals in bed, crippling, barking, and smelling each other. Richard found her adoring. Their sexual interaction made their romance concrete and solid.
參考答案:5年前，简和她的男朋友理查德相爱了，他是一个英俊的高个子。
也许仅仅“高”不足以形容他，“高大”更能形容这个29岁的家伙。
对于简和理查德来说，这不是他们的初恋。他们各自有自己心碎的故事。但是当他们互相了解的时候，他们决定不恨任何人，甚至那些伤害过他们的人。简那时19岁，拥有金色头发和白皙的皮肤。她经常专注于自己的情感，对大自然和动物的爱。她喜欢德国南部黑森林的鸟儿。她从来不知道她的善良本身就吸引男人. 哦,我忘了告诉你,她非常漂亮.
一天，简参加她朋友的一个生日派对。有20个客人，每一个都精力旺盛和开心。简和一个长着黑头发，一脸严肃的高个子跳舞。这就是理查德，他对舞伴一见钟情。派对后，他们一起离开。当简了解到理查德是一个慷慨且喜欢动物的人后，他们开始了一段罗曼蒂克。
理查德对简是如此的可靠和忠诚，使得简非常开心。简也是一个投入的情人，经常偷偷的注视理查德。派对结束后两周，他们恋爱了。简毫不犹豫的接受了他，因为她完全认可这个事实，即爱是无条件的满足你的爱人。她如此可爱，理查德欣喜若狂。他们在床上扮演动物，翘腿, 咆哮,嗅对方。理查德得到她的爱慕。他们的性别的交互作用使得他们的爱情具体而又坚固。
