Dear Nora:
I really don't know how to write this article,because I don't know what should I write,b-ecause this article is about my dream,and because I have many dreams in my life.
I wish that my life will be very exciting,every new thing for me is very guide and let m-e to beat the problem.I want to do every thing.Maybe that is my dream.
I belive I can,and I have enough time and good health.I want to know how hard this w orld is!That is the most beautiful life in my heart.
Of course,this dream maybe just like a dream,a dream to let me feel sad.We just liv-e in a dream,and it's difficult to wake up.Because when there is a new thing for you and you think you can win,but you lose.Because you belive you can,you do it again,but you los-e again.In fact you can't.You do it more times and you will feel more tired.The result is:Yo-u are old!!!
But if you beat the difficult and you get some thing such as money,you'll not want to do other thing and just want to do to get more money,the result is the same,you won't wak-e until you die.
Maybe I'm wrong,because you may find the difficult from one thing and you'll know how hard the world is.Maybe I'm right,because the problems in different things are differe-nt.Whatever,my dream.
That's all.
Your's
Tommy
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Dear Nora，
I really don't know what to write,because it is about my dream,and one of my dreams ina wonderful life.
I hope my life be exciting,all for me is just a guide, showing me how to beat the problem.I just hope to do better, that is my dream.
I belive I can do it with my time and good health.I want to experience how harda new world is!That is the most beautiful life in my mind.
Anyway, dream may always be dream, making me sad. We may just live in a dream and could not wake up, because when there is new challenge,and you think you can win,but you lose. You are unwilling to give up, you do it again, you lose again.
The truth may be you can not do it.
If you fight hard, and you get some payment in money. the result of indulging is the same, you cannot wake until death.
Maybe I'm wrong,from one thing you'll know how hard the world is. Maybe I'm right,because the problems are differe-nt. Whatever, that is my
Your's
Tommy
