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帮忙修改这篇英文稿子,谢谢!!

王朝知道·作者佚名  2009-08-11
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問題描述:

这是为一个小英文演讲准备的,主题是美国教育。

下面是PPT和补充讲话的内容,自己翻译的所以错误很多,希望大家指正!!(包括语法错误,或者是一些补充)

如果觉得我错漏太多要修改太麻烦的话,也可以自己翻译^ ^

希望能尽快收到回答~!越详细越好~! 现在给出50分是因为怕会出现无满意答复,得到详细的答复我会追加50分赏分,说话算数,谢谢大家!!

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下面是PPT内容:

1.The Characteristic of America Education

◎Be cautious when commend or criticize

◎Do not to compare to others student

◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation

2.Have a restricted view of American education in three sentence in America

◎NO CHILD LEFT BEHIND

◎The Wind Of Freedom Blows

◎Made In China

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以下是讲话内容: > <

◎Be cautious when commend or criticize

The teachers in America are seldom to commend a student in public places. One the one hand,they think that it is a hint that others student are worse then the one who is commended, it would make him be self-complacent and high-headed. One the other hand,it would make the student overweight the reputation and simply please the teacher instead of exert his portential. It would mislead the students. And once he can't get the teachers' commend,he will be frustrated by this. But the teachers are also feel troubled with criticize a student. They are very cautious to choose words. They don't want the student to refuse the criticize mentally because the wrong way of criticizing.

◎Do not to compare to others student

The American think that there are many way to weigh things so they never portest about comparing one student to others. Because they think every student is a independent one,they have their respective strongpoints and shortcomings. So they instruct students according their own characteristic,they help the student to understand themselves.因此,美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉(不会翻><)。

◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation

In American school there are many competition to imporve the students' ability. What make the student exciting is the prize not the place in that competition. The students get what they want through their self-strive,they think this is the absolutely necessarily living skill in todays society.

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參考答案:

1.The Characteristic(s) of America Education

Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.

Do not compare one child to another.

Do not compare students with each other.

◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation

(我不是很理解你这句话的内容.)

Emphasize more on cooperative learning and make light of elitism.

Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.

2. My view of American education ,summarizing in three sentences.

◎NO CHILD LEFT BEHIND

◎The Wind Of Freedom Blows

◎Made In China

Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.

◎我不同意你说的关于美国教师不在公开场合表扬学生的观点.相反他们公开大力表扬学生,但是他们表扬时,是表扬什么行为,而不是空洞地说某个学生好,听话. 我可不可以给出我的意见?( Can I say a few words?)

American teachers always believe in positive teaching. Whenever they make compliments, they emphase on specific good behaviors. For example, the teachers would say,” I like the way Johnny sits.” Or “ I am so proud of Mary. She cleans up her toys today.” “Compliment on David for using the magic words with his classmates.” Remarks like these are clear and fair so that other children know very well what the teachers expect them to do. When the teachers make critical remarks, again it is the undesirable behaviors that should be addressed. “ I am so disappointed that Johnny didn’t do his homework. “ David, it is very rude to do that. Do you want others treat you the same way you treat them?” Remarks like these are avoided,” Linda is good . David is bad . The teachers don’t purposely set up role models or elites. All students are considered excellent as long as they do what they are told.

◎Do not to compare to others student

Do not one child to another.

The American teachers think that there are many ways to weigh things so they never compare one student to another. Because they think each individual is unique. They respect the differences of each student. They believe everybody can learn, just not on the same day, or the same way. They organize instructions so that all students are given the opportunity to learn what is being taught. Of course, American students would never go through this “nerve breakdown and heartbeats pounding when reading everybody’s grades on a bulletin board.因此,美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉(不会翻><)。

◎Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.

In American schools students learn about group cooperation or teamwork. Everybody can make contributions to a group project. When children take part in a contest, they care more about the process rather than the rankings. They are taught to feel good about themselves. Some children are talented in art. Some children are talented in math. So everybody is special in a certain way.

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