bicycle of good and bad
The bicycle was a very great invention, It's was famous throughout the world. when we want to arrive the school or company in quickly, we can get the help from bicycle let you get enough time for anything.
but in today's modern society. we have many new invention, such as car\ motorcycle\ airplane\ subway,etc.... they have more fuction more traffice and take you farway! so the bicycle has
become a history in big city. only a small city or
village still use for the traffice. Though it's was very old but it had a good history so we must try to remember the bicycle forever
參考答案:bicycle of good and bad 你想说自行车的好处和坏处吧？那就可以是“the advantages and disadvantages of bicycle”
The bicycle was(虽然它已经发明了出来，是过去发明的，但你这个是一个陈述性的文章，所以该用is，难道他过去是一个伟大的发明，现在来说就不是了吗？) a very great invention, It's was（去掉这个was，一个句子不可能有两个动词，it’s的is已经是个动词了，你还加个was就变成两个be动词了） famous throughout the world. When（When要大写开头） we want to arrive（arrive后面要加介词at，因为arrive是个不及物动词，顾名思义，不及物动词后面就不能直接加名词。Arrive后面可以接at或者in） the（去掉the） school or company in quickly（in quickly改成quickly）, we can get the help from bicycle (加which can )let you get enough time for anything. (这个句子你犯的错跟前面一样，一个句子不能有两个动词，get 和let 都是动词)
but in today's modern society（在当今的现代社会，其实你这样翻译也不能说错，可是很中文化，你可以说“in modern society today”）. We have many new invention（inventions）, such as car\ motorcycle\ airplane\ subway,etc.... (要加and，要不就另起一个句子，they要大写开头)they have more fuction（functions） more traffice（traffic） and take you farway! so （大写开头）the bicycle has
become a history in big city. only a （用the，因为你用a的话意思就是强调只在一个小城市是这样的情况）small city or
village still use for the traffice(traffic). Though it's was(去掉was，又是一个句子不能两个动词，要弄两个动词的话必须用从句或是其它连词连起来) very old but it had a good history so we must try to remember the bicycle forever
我帮你改的几乎都是语法上不错误，至于你说句子用得飘不漂亮就没帮你改，你这个文章应该是让你明白你在说什么，可是很多句子其实你可以不这么中式化的，就是感觉上你就是把中文一个字一个字地翻译成英文，翻译其实很多时候要那个意思就行了，切忌一个字一个字翻译。
