高血压患病率有较大幅度升高。18岁及以上居民高血压患病率为18.8%，全国患病人数约为1.6亿多；高血压知晓率仅为30.2%，治疗率为24.7%，控制率为6.1%。
The incidence of high blood pressure is increasing. It is 18.8% among 18+ years old. In China more than 160million have high blood pressure, among which detection rate is 30.2%, treatment rate is 24.7%, and control rate is 6.1%.
请高手帮忙修改一下，尤其是后半部分。谢谢啦。
Have a good day!
參考答案:后半部分这样也可以了，或者可以更紧凑一点：
More than 160 million Chinese people have high blood pressure, among which the detection rate, treatment rate and control rate are 30.2%, 24.7% and 6.1% respectively.
